86,000 words

It keeps going. Some big changes in the direction of the book lately......

Mainly...

1. I've decided to make it more York-like. i.e to reference the buildings more and to get the reader more familiar with certain streets and landmarks.

2. Less and less involvement of other characters. Much more monologue and involvement of the main character.

3. Less dialogue and more of the main character talking about what happened instead of having the dialogue.

4. Less scenes that don't have a real edge or uniqueness to them. If it doesn't feel on the edge, I don't want it.

5. More truth!!!!!


86,000 woohoo!