Looking over and editing some of the borderline bits

Spent some of tonight looking over the book as a whole, and also editing some of the bits that i don't think will make the final cut.

Some of them make me laugh cos they are so bad. An extrovert, show-offy radio presenter that is just hilarious to read back. However, for the bits that don't seem to work , I'm not cutting them yet, til I've written out all the words. Then I might adapt some of the poorer bits, or cut them out completely.