The book keeps going. And things are slowly getting glued together. The glue-ing is a very long but fun process.
The wise characters - ie the ones loosely based on Jim, Phil and Lexi - are having their storylines plotted better and more exact so I'm getting a good indication of the exact scenes they appear in, and what should happen in each scene.
In addition, I'm doing a lot of colouring in... By this , I mean going to old scenes I've written and inserting bits in there that tweak it and help the flow of the story.
Out of interest, the book begins with a kiss. As for the ending, after a period of erm lets say intense drama, the final scene is just one of the everyday monologue bits :-)
Anyway, here's some of the random sentences from stuff i added tonight, now that blogspot lets me copy and paste finally lol.
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I know my journey isn’t really like anyone else’s, but my joy in the journey is just the same.
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On the way, a flock of sparrows squabbled over a half-eaten sandwich on the edge of a tennis court.
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And a greyish rectangular face, both pointed and poignant in appearance.
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Across the pavement, a squashed ice cream proved exciting for a little black and white dog.
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Its now at the stage of year where it's feeling cold even though it ought not to be. Or maybe that’s just because it mirrors how I’m feeling.
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That must be like the coolest thing that’s ever happened to that blackbird.
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